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Chapter 26. Answer Keys > Suggested Revision to Memo Editing

Suggested Revision to Memo Editing

This revision is just one approach to improving the memo. Here, the president uses a more personal tone (We rather than XYZ Company and You rather than employees). Using active (rather than passive) voice helps keep the information simpler, clearer, and shorter.


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