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Chapter 4. Eliminate Time-Wasters > Reduce “of ” and “that/who/which” Clutter

Reduce “of ” and “that/who/which” Clutter

Time-waster: John Smith, who is the manager of our sales department, is on vacation in the month of June.
Time-saver: John Smith, our sales manager, is on vacation in June.
Time-waster: The new advertising campaign that we are developing is definitely not on schedule.
Time-saver: The new ad campaign we are developing is behind schedule.
or: Our new ad campaign is behind schedule.



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