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Part IV: Exercises to Help You Write Bet... > Exercise #21—Revising a Memo (2)

Chapter 26. Exercise #21—Revising a Memo (2)

Revise the memo below. The memo’s number one fault is wordiness. Get out your blue pencil and cross out unnecessary words and sentences. Also, substitute familiar words for big words. Make the tone of the memo more conversational.


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