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Part IV: Exercises to Help You Write Bet... > Exercise #20—Revising a Memo (1)

Chapter 25. Exercise #20—Revising a Memo (1)

Revise the memo below. The original sounds stiff and cold; rewrite it using language that is more personal and human. Change passive sentences to active. Also correct errors in spelling and punctuation.


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